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Post  Icekit on Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:50 am

Icekit was racing across the open land in Windclan to cross the border, a strong smell reached his nostrils as he reached a much more forrested area. His Ice blue eyes scanned the area. It was hard to see past the bushes and trees, there was the sounds of a river, or several rivers.
The clan near the river... Is this it?
He crouched to the ground as he heard a noise in the distance.

A squirrel raced past, Icekit didn't wait a second, nstantly he leaped forwards and messily finished the squirrel. He didn't even check if anyone heard him, but he was hungry.
Before he left, he was only two moons old when his mother decided to not nurse him. Instead she killed a scrawny mouse and commanded him to eat it.

Icekit had learned to hunt for himself, but there were some branches and some leaves here, allowing his finishing moves to be more clumsy. He crouched down ready to eat the plump squirrel, If there is a clan here, I doubt they'll need this, they can hunt themselves!
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Post  Oak on Sat Feb 04, 2012 1:59 pm

"What are you doing here!'' Brokenstar the leader of Nightclan hissed.

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Post  Silverstream on Sat Feb 04, 2012 3:03 pm

Moonleaf smiled and appeared from the shadows. "Well look what we have here. We should force it to join NightClan, he could be useful." She smirked evilly. "But of course we could always kill it right here, just saying."
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Post  Oak on Sat Feb 04, 2012 3:45 pm

"I think we should let it live,to see why its here." Brokenstar said.

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Post  Silverstream on Sat Feb 04, 2012 3:50 pm

Moonleaf nodded reluctantly. "If you say so, Brokenstar." She sighed, always ruin the fun.

OOC: Hey Oaky, when are we going to start the plot?
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Post  Oak on Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:39 pm

OOC: soon I'm still working on it,trying to make it good,you can help through pms since your deputy .

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Post  NKninja on Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:56 am

Etching her way through the large rooted trees, the sly Abyssinian feline was crossing through the disgusting smelling territory, her bright, luminesent gray-blue colored pelt shone with the light of the sun ever so slightly. She notched her ear ever so slightly to the right, hearing the sound of a conflict from afar... Finally, something fun, she thought as she skidded closer to the side of the tree, and into a sutible bush where she could see the incompetent foresters and what she called, the future.
She made the term of that for a kit resembling their time of many questions and the always bickering of 'when I grow up'. She finally noticed that they had only recently had met the Future, and didn't like his occurence in their territory.
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Post  Icekit on Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:03 am

Icekit at first jumped with the hiss of a much bigger and older tom. He never cared much for ranks, despite his mother telling him so.

Star? Broken... star? Why is that name so familiar? Not broken of coarse... wait! Mother always told me about a cat with star... they're leaders, you have to respect them. hmph!

Icekit fluffed out his fur, but he was still quite small. In embarrasment he felt hot under his pelt. "I don't need to explain my buisness to you strangers! If momma knew you gave me trouble, she'd tear you to peices!" Bits of squirrel fur were spat out as he growled this.

Suddenly, he felt a sadness sweep over him, he raised his head to look at Brokenstar in the eye, "This whole thing is momma's fault." He mewed softly, "She told me to look for pappa and live with him."

Tears of desperation swelled in his eyes, fogging his veiw, "Momma said she would meet me there... but I haven't seen her for over a moon... and she's sick..." He faded off, sniffed and with a paw washed his face in attempt to cool down.
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Post  Oak on Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:29 am

Brokenstar who still had a soft side asked. "Do you have any idea where your papa is?"

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Post  Silverstream on Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:33 am

"I hate to interrupt," Moonleaf explained, "But we have plotting to do. My dear Brokenstar, this kit is simply wasting our time."

OOC: Can you PM me what you've got so far Oaky?
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Post  NKninja on Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:12 am

OOC: Yay, funness for me!

IC: Aristeal began to bring up an amused purr and smile, Ah! Improv! Just what I need! She thought as she intentionally heaved herself out of the the bush. Resembling a trip, she landed hard on her jaw, " Owww!" She hissed in pain.
With her front paws, she covered her muzzle to maintain the aching feeling, NOT How it was going to begin, She thought, turning her head the the duo patrol. " Oh! Um... Hi?" she said awkwardly.
Now the idea came to her, she would be a loner that lost her way into this territory by coincidence.
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Re: Stranger in the territory

Post  Icekit on Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:58 am

Icekit opened his jaws to reply, but hearing the other she- cat interrupt and having the other strange she- cat enter, he just crouched. Trembling, unaware what to do. he took a deep breath before he got to his full height and meowed bravely,
"Momma told me to look for the clan by the lake... She never told me who my pappa was nor where he was... I only have the memory of her description of him."

He silently scolded himself for his still trembling voice, merely a squeak. Stupid furball! Why can't I sound tougher like them!
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Re: Stranger in the territory

Post  Little on Tue Feb 07, 2012 10:16 pm

"What's going on here?" Wolfspirit came running towards everybody. Baring his fangs he looked at Icekit "and who exactly are you?"
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Post  Oak on Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:19 pm

Brokenstar looked at the cat who had just fell out of the bushes and said "Get off my territory or I will (eat you LOL) kill you!" "As for you kit come with me."

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Re: Stranger in the territory

Post  Little on Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:23 pm

Wolfspirit looked at him "ohsnap,


(And im Icekit dad Very Happy)


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Post  Oak on Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:28 pm

(I was talking about nk's cat

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Post  Little on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:00 am

Oh... I just edited that, Sorry people!
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Post  Icekit on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:10 am

(That's K)
Icekit lowered his head, I hope this clan leader can help. There was some familiar smell that surrounded Wolfspirit. Why is that smell so familiar? Could it be?
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Post  Little on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:13 am

"Who are you?" Wolfspirit growled, teeth bared. This kits smells ... familiar he thought
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Post  Icekit on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:17 am

Icekit looked up bravely, "I'm Icekit, my momma sent me to find my father, last time she saw him... she said something like... Wolf, I think his name is Wolf. But I don't know him, she said she left before I was born. My brother and sister died on the trip.
(He actually killed them cause of sibling problems >Smile ) But momma always told me of how I was the strongest kit." He smiled bravely, his own Ice blue eyes studying this strange tom, whom he had a feeling was his father.
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Post  Little on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:21 am

"Well we don't have anyone just named Wolf" he gave Icekit a devilish grin "Such a misery to go on a trip, and come back with nothing"
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Post  Icekit on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:26 am

Icekit stood up taller, "Because of the trip I've grown stronger, I would harm any cat that got in my way."
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Post  Little on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:29 am

"Oh really?" Wolfspirit looked down at the kit "who do you think your talking to, I am your father!"
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Post  Icekit on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:39 am

(Yeah but he don't know that. XD)
"yeah, a tom who just doesn't know who not to mess with, If my momma or pappa found out, they'd tear you to shreads and feed you to the badgers."
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Re: Stranger in the territory

Post  Oak on Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:43 am

"Leave him alone Wolfspirit." Brokenstar said.

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